My random poem on People in Deserts...kinda weird, lol?

You have some good phrases...the concept is also pretty good. You also painted images rather than hitting us with narrative, another good point. It's not "random", but it could be refined. Look at your images and put them in an order the makes a point. You have no trouble creating images, but they need to better meld into a storyline. I would not trash this poem, I'd revise it. Good start..keep writing