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People wish to live in a perfect environment, a utopia, in which they are given freedom from suffering and anxiety. In this ideal world, they are able to share joyful memories with their families and friends. Nevertheless, it is impossible for people to live in such an environment because they commit sins and transgressions. Hence, all people turn their back to the Almighty God. Only in heaven, people enjoy living with the beautiful angels. Humans can take pleasure in conversing with God in this heavenly abode. If people knew that God is truly in control, the world would certainly be a much better place. With this knowledge, people would realize they have violated certain commandments. When the sinful experience conviction through the Holy Spirit, their only choice is to turn to the God of love and repent of their sins. In this way, former sinners would be able to live happily with the words of God in Earth and be filled with the anointing of the Holy Spirit.